Two drabbles (although, technically, they're too long to fall under that category; well, more than 100 words, see?). This time, both Mag7, Chris/Ezra. One OW, one ATF. See for yourself.
The following one is the one set in the Old West, and no, this time, I didn't write in German... ;-)
Sunlight, Sun bright
Author: allaire mikháil
Fandom: The Magnificent Seven (TV series)
Pairing: Chris Larabee / Ezra Standish
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A snapshot of a moment in the bright light of the sun. A study in contrast.
Beta thanks to: thenightsfall
Old West, 563 words, other POV.
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Sunlight, Sun bright
She almost gasped out loud at the picture she was presented with.
They stood close together; in fact, so close that not a piece of paper would have fit between their bodies. The taller man sat on the edge of the sturdy wooden table, a bit slouched down, incredibly relaxed and, for once, not on guard. His blond hair shone like a beacon in the bright rays of sun falling through the window. His companion was standing directly in front of him, between his slightly spread legs. The smaller man wore a red coat, the color even more vibrant in the patch of sunlight around the table. The red also made an interesting contrast to the somber black attire of his partner. One of the men appeared to perpetually be enclosed in darkness, a part of the shadows of the room save his hair, the other as conspicuous as a robin. In the in-falling light, his brown hair shone with auburn highlights, his eyes lightened up to a startling green. Dust motes glittered in the air near the window like specks of molten gold.
This image alone was radiant enough, would have been more than sufficient to cause anyone to stop in mid-stride, to pause and look in wonder, just for a moment. A heartbeat of incomparable beauty, a living work of art. Jewels -- ruby, sapphire -- and gold. But it wasn't the overall picture that made her draw in a sharp breath, the beauty of the sight inevitably lost upon her.
It was the impression of the shorter man's hands buried in his friend's shining blond hair, knotted in the sunny strands. The hair was long enough to completely hide the high forehead and tumbled halfway into the man's eyes, bright, beautiful, like a part of the sun itself. But as much as the hair obscured his features, showing just the proud line of eyebrows, nose and cheekbones, something else, pressed against his face, hid even more. The other man was kissing him, long, involved, deeply, all the while fisting the golden hair, using it to pull his lover even closer. Soft wet sounds floated on the warm breeze coming through the open window; sounds of kissing. Mouths devouring, lips drinking the other in. Tongues touching, throats moving. Lost in passion, oblivious.
She swallowed dryly, standing frozen in the open door. The dark-clad man's hands had also found purchase, now slowly slipping down his partner's back, coming to rest on his buttocks. Drawing him nearer. Rhythmically kneading the firm flesh. And while she couldn't see it from where she was standing, the men's reactions made it apparent enough that they were both aroused heavily, bumping and grinding against each other now, moaning low, clutching even harder. Shining hair and muscular backside; hands on scratchy red wool warmed by the sun, fingers entwined in sun-warmed, sun-bleached strands. Bodies straining closer, closer, closer, soft words now heard, words of passion, of love -- words she'd never have imagined to come from either man's lips...
She pressed her hand to her mouth and fled, oblivious to the beauty highlighted in the rectangle of light around the table in her son's room above the Standish Tavern. Her darling son and, of all people, Chris Larabee. Maude should have known. Summer had never been her favorite time of the year. Too hot, too... well, hot. Undignified.
"The Magnificent Seven" (TV series) ficlet by allaire mikháil, "The Magnificent Seven" (TV series) ficlet by allaire mikháil, OW, 563 words, Chris/Ezra, other POV, rated PG-13.
Inspired by a) Michael Biehn's hair, b) the 5th season finale kiss in "Oz" and c) summer.
Read-through by Lumina~ and declared fit to make it on its own -- thank you, honey! <g>
- Mood:
dazzled
Comments
Wonderful describtions here, especially of CHris. He so often gets described as dark and seeminly dull and people never seem to notice just how bright he can be despite his dark clothing. Not only his hair but also his smile (okay, he isn't smiling here but still).
As for the whole colors, from jewels to summer and autumn. I could feel the summer-inspiration, the bright summer with hints of a warm, lazy mid-summer/early autum in it.
Wonderfully done, Allaire.
Thank you very much, Gwen! :-)))
And let me tell you, it was Michael Biehn's hair that first captured my attention. In either "Manhunt" or "Sins of the Past" Chris is sitting in the sheriff's bureau in the jail and talking to Vin, and his hair is no longer as short as in the Pilot, but rather long enough to partially obscure his face. And yes, it does look golden, and it is glowing in the infalling light. And I--I... heck, I fell in love. <g>
And I like his mouth, too. Can't understand why anyone would describe it as having 'thin lips'. No way!
*wipes drool off her chin*
But enough of that!
I'm writing another drabble/ficlet at the moment (I'm afraid I don't have the engergy/inspiration to write a longer story right now), but I haven't given up on the storyideas floating in my head. Really. By the way, I'd more than love to read a C/E kiss fic by you! :-
And I'm already writing the C/E-Variations. Two of them actually and one that insists on some sex and because of that no longer fits into my Variations-concept. And a another C/E-ficlet. And the Guardian-AU and ... and...and...
Not to mention LotR . I still own someone a sequel-drabble ;-)
Know what you mean about lack of energy. I force myself to write every evening, even if it's only a few words. Better than nothing and I really want to get into the practice of writing every day at least a little bit so that I can start to tackle my original-novel as well. I had planned to have a novel written by November. And I'm still sticking to that plan, even though time is runnung away with my and my slash-muses are currently going crazy.
Already looking forwrad to the next drabble . Storyideas? Tell me more.
Btw, ICQ no longer working? Miss chatting with you.
*nodnodnod*
Exactly! And the way he slung his gunbelt over his shoulder. And narrowed his eyes in the sun. Ahem. ;-)
As for your C/E fics, I'm all for the 'sex' part. Heh. And I admire you for your persistence -- writing a bit each day... <sighs enviously> The only way I get anything written is by doing these ficlets at work. Thank God for my new Finereader software... I print the text I typed at work into the computer (no, they don't have floppy disk drives or *anything* :-( ) and scan it with that at home. Yeah, I know I shouldn't write at work. But I'm so pathetically grateful for inspiration, any inspiration, that I simply can't resist whenever the muses decide to whisper into my ears. Well.
Still owe you a long, loooong e-mail! <g>
And I haven't installed ICQ again; I still distrust that program after my C-Drive miraculously got full on my old computer. I attribute that to ICQ, perhaps falsely, but I need the space on this one for my future plans for converting tapes to VCDs. Well, someday, anyway... <sigh>
So, now I'm off to pack my things for the weekend; a friend of mine in Berlin is going to marry, and I'm invited. :-)))
Hugs,
Allaire :-)
Oh yes, I'll join your droool-festival.
I'm trying to teach myself some writing-discpline. Even if it's only ten words, at least I looked at the story and tried to work on it and maybe I can work my way up, ten words on day, twenty the next and so on. I still dream of getting published professionally but for that to happen I would have to finish something first and not only run around with tons of ideas in my head.
Writing at work. tz, Allaire, you've been a bad girl. . Where do you think most of my drabbles were written? I couldn't use the PC at my old job as my boss sat on the desk right behind mine and had a perfect view on my screen but nobody suspected anything when I wrote something on a notepad.
Wrote parts of a Variation-ficlet yesterday and today at work. Thank god we can use floppies.
Ah yes, those e-mails...I'll continue to wait, patiently .
Have fun in Berlin at your friend's wedding.
Will try to do that! We just finished artfully decorating a small potted palm (mini-)tree with Euro-notes and coins... and I can barely discern these words on my friend B.'s screen (at whose place I'm staying for the weekend).
I hope your writing-discipline attempt works out -- good luck! And I'd love to read your original fiction once you get it down on paper... ahem, that is, on file. ;-)
I'm still working on that disciplin-thing. Can't really speak of success yet. AT least i managed to look at the file every evening and wrote or changed more than one word. Is that already a success considering that I sometimes ignored stories for weeks, months and even years?
I can already dump some original work on you, if you're really interested. Mostly poetry so far and more should be coming soon. Though, once the weather gets better again, I think I'll spend less time in front of the PC and instead take my bicycle out. Or end up with a notebook on the balcony. We'll see.
As for your original work, I fear I won't be able to make any sensible comments on your poetry since my approach to that has always been either 'Hey, I like it!' or 'Uh.', without me being able to give reasons for either reaction... <eg></
Okay, I won't pester you with original poetry but maybe the fantasy-novel?
And by now, I guess I even might have the time again! <glares at the boxes with tapes in the corner of her living room: "Even you won't hold me back for long!">
BTW, I totally understand your drooling over Michael Biehn... ;-)
<passes around drool-bucket *g*>