woah! very powerful.
your choice to have Zelenka be the spokesman made it even more powerful, IMO. The perception of Zelenka is that he is a "trustworthy" character, the "good guy," so the impact of him saying those things is that much greater.
and I liked your depiction of McKay's dilemma. Torn between his loyalty to Sheppard and Weir, and his own agreement with Zelenka's POV
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your choice to have Zelenka be the spokesman made it even more powerful, IMO. The perception of Zelenka is that he is a "trustworthy" character, the "good guy," so the impact of him saying those things is that much greater.
and I liked your depiction of McKay's dilemma. Torn between his loyalty to Sheppard and Weir, and his own agreement with Zelenka's POV
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