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This story is agenda!fic set post-"Critical Mass". Just so you're warned.

Newton's Third Law
Author: allaire mikháil
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard, Lorne/Parrish and others
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.
Beta thanks to: [livejournal.com profile] lemonbella and [livejournal.com profile] fenris_wolf0.

The download-friendly .html version of this story can be found here. Enjoy!


Newton's Third Law


Unsurprisingly enough it started with the engineering department, for reasons that in retrospect were more than obvious.

The engineers chose Dr. Simpson as their representative and, in the hours before Radek entered Dr. Weir's office, they fell suspiciously silent every time Rodney came near. He was too tired, punchy, and too busy thinking about the necessary city repairs to notice anything amiss, so he simply dissolved any such gatherings with his usual: "You are idiots. You are non-productive idiots. Stop whispering and get back to work already!"

On paper, he was the department head of hard and soft sciences alike, but he was happy to hear as little of the anthropologists, linguists and biologists et al as possible. Thankfully they were usually sensible enough not to interrupt his much more important work, but today seemed to be the exception. So while he noticed Katie Brown, mousy and unattractive with tear-swollen eyes and a new-found penchant to stare at the floor, scurrying through his lab and dragging Zelenka to the side, he was quite happy not to be the person chosen to resolve whatever blunder the biologists had made.

Perhaps her tears even stemmed from a more personal problem (after all, breaking up with him had to count as a monumental mistake, Rodney thought smugly), and now she needed advice as how to win him back. No matter - he was over her.

The silent tug-of-war between a resolute Dr. Parrish and a ghostly pale Major Lorne at the doors to the astrophysics lab was something else entirely, but considering that Lorne and Sheppard had an 'I-don't-notice-anything-amiss-if-you-don't' thing going on, he bit back a sarcastic comment that otherwise would have more or less amounted to, "Having a lovers' spat, are we?". Instead he just stared at Parrish until the man was finished whispering with Zelenka, started twisting his hands and hurried out.

The rest of the morning was spent making sure that any Trust manipulations of the city's systems had been eradicated, new security parameters set, and that Cadman had finally tied her stupid hair out of her face. She had refused to budge from her computer, and the fourth time she had blown back a blonde strand hanging into her face, Rodney had pointed her in the direction of the infirmary and told her that Atlantis was no place for a Barbie contest and to go rediscover her secret inner woman with Carson.

Her rejoinder had been particularly biting, but he'd closed the lab door in her face; sometimes he really loved having the gene. He snorted at the memory, looked up from his laptop, intent on sharing his observations with Radek, only to find the other scientist gone.

Then he heard shouting coming from the 'gate room and hurried to investigate.

He stopped short and averted his gaze to stare at the handful of techs and guards next to the dialing computers. Elizabeth was sequestered with someone and voicing her displeasure rather loudly - an experience he remembered only too well. He frowned as he realized it was not her raised voice that resonated from her office overseeing the 'gate room - the voice was male and had a Czech accent.

He couldn't come up with a single explanation as to why Radek would be in a shouting match with Elizabeth. Yesterday he would have sworn that Zelenka would never dare stand up to Elizabeth; the Czech's puppy-dog worship was as pathetic as it was wretched, and he'd told Radek so until the other man had shot back with a barb concerning Rodney's understandable admiration of Dr. Carter. After that, they'd decided on a détente and Rodney even refrained from rolling his eyes when it got really bad. Although, on these occasions the staring matches between Zelenka and Teyla were a thing of beauty.

He tried to understand the words being shouted which, due to the volume, wasn't all that difficult.

"...Dr. Weir, you have no choice! We are civilians and not subject to orders given by the US military! If we want to go back, nobody is going to say we cannot; this is an outpost and the first line of defense in the war against the Wraith, and everybody at home will understand that we don't want to die out here now that we can go back to Earth. I've e-mailed you the new crew manifest for the Daedalus' return to Earth. The ship leaves tomorrow with Colonel Caldwell in custody, and 96 of Atlantis' 117 scientists on board."

Rodney's mouth was hanging open. That was almost the entire science department.

"We will not wait for replacements for who knows if or when they will be sent. More than one government would happily leave us here to die if only to get back a little Ancient tech, yes, or the Daedalus' next trip will be miraculously delayed - we cannot take that risk. You of course can meet each of us and ask us to stay, but they have all asked to have their departmental representatives present at each such discussion."

Rodney blinked. He couldn't wrap his mind around what he'd heard. He waited for a riposte from Elizabeth, but her office remained strangely silent. That was when he remembered that he was Atlantis' Chief Science Officer, and it would be well within his rights to have a part of any shouting matches involving his underlings, especially if they were of the Czech Judas variety.

He stormed up the stairs and burst into Elizabeth's office after a wholly perfunctory rap against the stained-glass door.

"Radek, Elizabeth, are you both insane?! What is going on here?!"

Elizabeth was not the furious red color he'd expected, but rather a shade of pale that made her too-dark mascara stand out even more than usual. Radek flinched, dropped a PDA and stared at him as if he were on the edge of a heart-attack. Rodney noticed in a detached way that the other man was trembling.

"Okay, fine, when did I enter the Twilight Zone? Why do I have to hear about pretty much the whole scientific department wanting to return to Earth? Radek?" He shot the Czech his best glare and kept waiting for Elizabeth to react. He couldn't understand why she didn't say anything.

Zelenka visibly pulled himself together and said quietly, but firmly: "The engineering department has started a petition that 96 of us have signed - we want to leave Atlantis and return to Earth. We are civilians and cannot be forcibly held in a war zone against our will. We will leave on the Daedalus."

"Yeah, I got that bit," Rodney snapped back. "I thought the Goa'uld was only in Caldwell's brain and not in everyone else's." He shuddered at the thought of Caldwell's eyes flashing white. "Leave Atlantis? What for? Sure, there are the Wraith, but we survived the siege, and unless Sheppard spills it all - again! - to the next pretty female Wraith or Wraith sympathizer he stumbles across, they'll keep on believing we are dead. Flaming nuclear inferno, remember?"

"Rodney!" Radek pulled off his glasses and pushed a hand through his hair. It looked even more Einsteinesque than usual. Elizabeth kept staring at the top of her desk. Rodney smirked and tried to ignore the heavy weight in his stomach warning him that something was seriously wrong.

"Dr. Simpson has talked to Dr. Kavanagh--"

"What?!" Rodney shouted.

"--and while they often disagree professionally, yes, they are still colleagues and perhaps even friends, and she refuses to stay under the command of someone who ordered him tortured. As do we."

Rodney's brain suddenly was strangely blank and refused to come up with a rejoinder.

"I come from a country where not too long ago civil rights were something that the government agencies spurned whenever they felt like it. Many of us had friends arrested for nothing, yes, or friends who disappeared, or friends who fled the country. Even the Geneva Convention forbids the torture of captured military personnel, and we are civilians. Dr. Weir and Lieutenant Colonel Sheppard crossed a line that should never have been crossed--"

"Now wait a minute! Sheppard had no--"

"--and we don't trust her leadership anymore. We leave. Perhaps we'll even leave the SGC altogether." And with that, Radek turned on his heel and left.

Rodney stood rooted to the spot, mouth open, face hot, looking at Elizabeth who was still staring at her desk and hiding her face behind her hand. She made no sound, but there was moisture running through her fingers and dropping on the uppermost report spread on the desk's surface.

He was just about to offer her a tissue when a cheerful Sheppard bounced in through the door.

"Elizabeth - oh, hi Rodney - we can recommence gate travel tomorrow, right? Are will still up for M7X-452? The MALP came back--" Sheppard fell silent at the sight of their frozen expressions.

"Hey, what happened? Rodney, is your lab out of coffee already?"



"Stargate: Atlantis" ficlet by allaire mikháil, 1.508 words, McKay/Sheppard, Lorne/Parrish and others, McKay POV, rated PG-13, set in Season 2 immediately post-"Critical Mass".

This story is as much agenda!fic as one can get and stemmed from various discussions in the aftermath of "Critical Mass". The episode and its statement - "Torture is okay if the victim is a jerk and if you feel moderately bad about it afterwards." - turned my stomach, and the non-reaction it caused in far too many corners of the fandom really got my ire up. I'm particular like that.

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] fenris_wolf0 for insisting that I value canon over fanon (in regard to Zelenka's speech pattern) as well as for making me defend my opinions. The biggest thank-you, though, goes to [livejournal.com profile] lemonbella for a beta job extraordinaire and for encouraging me to polish this until it shone.

Comments

[identity profile] allaire.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2006 10:44 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Thanks! Your question,

And I'd love to know if Rodney was able to change some of the others' minds.

somehow reminded me of my issues with some X-Files M/K fanfic - I do believe Mulder would/should only forgive Krycek for his actions (provided he did indeed kill Bill Mulder) if a) Krycek begged his forgiveness (and meant it), he b) changed his ways, and c) made some sort of reparation.

The same applies to the command staff here - if Weir, Sheppard et all apologized, promised to be less prejudiced and immoral in the future, and openly admitted their culpability to the SGC, Kavanagh would be mollified (at least a little, and perhaps only through pressure by the rest of Atlantis' science department) and Radek and his people would stay.

Without any of the above three points, or with only part of them? Not so much.

Since I cannot see Weir apologizing to Kavanagh and meaning it (and without adding that "times were desperate", if only "he hadn't behaved so suspiciously", he "had to understand" and more such crap), the Daedalus would have ended up with a lot of extra passengers...
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[identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2006 11:15 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Somehow reminded me of my issues with some X-Files M/K fanfic - I do believe Mulder would/should only forgive Krycek for his actions (provided he did indeed kill Bill Mulder) if a) Krycek begged his forgiveness (and meant it), he b) changed his ways, and c) made some sort of reparation.

Yeah, 'cause c'mon, if Krycek really did kill Mulder's dad, you think our foxy secret agent man would just forgive and forget if Krycek asked nicely and batted his gorgeous eyes? *snorts* Hell, I seem to remember Mulder handcuffing Krycek off of a high balcony in winter. Hm? *shakes head* And yeah, the only way I could see Fox even coming close to achieving the forgiving state of mind is if Krycek went out of his way... repeatedly... to prove that he'd turned sides. Because, isn't that what the man'd been doing already... playing every side he could so he could come out alive and ahead? Alex would have to risk his life repeatedly in order to gain Fox's, and also Dana's, trust.

Damn, I haven't thought about X-Files in that amount of detail in years. Heh. Cool. And here my husband had worried that my Invisible Man and now my SGA obsession had taken over my brain. ;)

(breaking up post 'cause I got so friggin' long-winded)
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[identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2006 11:16 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
(continued from 7:15 post)

The same applies to the command staff here - if Weir, Sheppard et all apologized, promised to be less prejudiced and immoral in the future, and openly admitted their culpability to the SGC, Kavanagh would be mollified (at least a little, and perhaps only through pressure by the rest of Atlantis' science department) and Radek and his people would stay.

I think the Atlantis command staff'd more than likely include what had happened in their incident reports... although I could so see Sheppard considering leaving out the parts involving Ronon. But since Caldwell (or actually, the Goa'uld controlling him) was in on the decision-making process, he'd be duty-bound to include that in his report. Hrm, since Caldwell had been conpromised during that episode, I guess he could claim that he didn't have a clear memory of the decision to torture Kavanagh.

OMFG, I just realized something. *jaw drops as lightbulb flares to blazing life in mind* I saw on Gateworld that the actor who plays Woolsey on SG1 is reprising that role on SGA sometime during Season 3. So maybe the show's writers kept long term consequences in mind in regards to Critical Mass? Oh shit, that has to be it! *bounces* SWEET!!!

Sorry, got a wee bit excited there for a moment. *snicker* If that's really why Woolsey's coming to Pegasus, then damn... 'cause now I have yet another plot bunny wriggling its adorkable damned nose at me. *glares at Pythonesque bunny* Here's hoping that the Woolsey ep is about Kav having filed a formal complaint, and an official inquiry and investigation had to be opened. Because you know how it is with the military, eh? All sorts of paperwork has to be filled out... in triplicate... and notarized... and signed by all named in the incident reports... and so on and so forth blah blah blah... *chuckle* So yeah, it'd take some time for the investigation to get rolling. And if Kavanagh had been sent to the Daedalus like right after he'd awoken from his fainting spell *snort*, I think he'd be too damned proud to have told anyone about what'd led to said fainting spell. It's not like he actually has any friends on Atlantis, are there? *strokes chin thoughtfully*

And oh yeah, considering how obsessed he was with documenting every single command discrepancy in that first year and beyond, and reporting it all to the SGC, I can definitely see him keeping his mouth shut all the way back to Earth, copiously going over all his damning evidence, and then presenting his complaint and report the first chance he got to contact the Pentagon and Joint Chiefs. I don't think he'd risk just reporting the "incident" to General Landry. Not with something this big.

And you know what? As much a selfish, self-important prig as Calvin Kavanagh is, he so didn't deserve what the others in Atlantis were willing to do. Yeah, still sticks in my craw too, hon.

Damn damn damn. Now I'm friggin excited about Season 3. MORE so than I already was.
Is it July yet? *grumbles* That's the only reason I'm in such a rush to get past my birthday. *snort Otherwise, what's there to be excited about in turning 33? ;)
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PS - sorry I babbled on, dear. I tend to do that sometimes.
[identity profile] allaire.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 29th, 2006 11:31 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Yeah, 'cause c'mon, if Krycek really did kill Mulder's dad, you think our foxy secret agent man would just forgive and forget if Krycek asked nicely and batted his gorgeous eyes?

That's were the "reparation" bit comes in - saving Scully, preventing colonization or something equally big. Not that Kryeck batting his eyes wouldn't be a nice start (considering that for a long time Mulder hadn't had sex since Phoebe). *eg*

Damn damn damn. Now I'm friggin excited about Season 3. MORE so than I already was. Is it July yet?

If what you're theorizing about comes true, I might just change my mind and put SGA back on its pedestal. Until then? Not so much exited, sorry.

PS - sorry I babbled on, dear. I tend to do that sometimes.

No problem - babble away. *g*
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[identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)
Re: Wow
That's where the "reparation" bit comes in - saving Scully, preventing colonization or something equally big. Not that Kryeck batting his eyes wouldn't be a nice start (considering that for a long time Mulder hadn't had sex since Phoebe). *eg*

Oh hell yeah. *G* Can't tell you how close I came to pissing my pants when I saw Nicholas Lea guest-starring on a few episodes of CSI Vegas a few years ago. That man has obscenely gorgeous eyes.
Then again, so does David Duchovny. *drools copiously* I think what'd definitely help in the "forgive me, Fox" cause would be first having a very dangerous key role in preventing the colonization (with of course a bit of Krycek whumping goin' on, heh), and then chaining himself naked to Mulder's bed and saying - "Do whatever you want with me. I deserve what I get." *VBG*

If what you're theorizing about comes true, I might just change my mind and put SGA back on its pedestal. Until then? Not so much exited, sorry.

Hey, same here, hon. I just got this feeling towards the end of the season that the show's PTB had wanted to put so much into the season, and had run out of time to set everything up the way they'd wanted to. As if they'd been hurried and short-staffed with plotting the episodes or something... So they did what they could, and left all sorts of stuff out (some intentionally) due to the combined time/budget constraints and pressure from the network (yes, I have serious issues with TPTB at Skiffy), and are now hoping to clear a bunch of stuff up in Season 3.

Well, that's my hope, anyway. Until then, well... SGA's the best thing out there right now, IMHO, since I'm still trying to adjust to the changes on SG1 (hey, I love that Ben Browder and Claudia Black joined up! Though hubby loves to tease me by asking if I'm watching Starscape or Fargate again *snort*), and CSI's been a bit of a disappointment after last season's spectacular finale. Then again, how hard must it have been to come up with episodes to hold up after a Quentin Tarrantino production like that? Yup, love that man's directorial style.

And I've been deprived of The Invisible Man so friggin' long, it's just sad.
Okay, getting maudlin here. Need to hie my butt off to bed. *hugs*
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[identity profile] allaire.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 08:56 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Eeep, you have a Hobbes/Fawkes icon! ;-)

Can't tell you how close I came to pissing my pants when I saw Nicholas Lea guest-starring on a few episodes of CSI Vegas a few years ago. That man has obscenely gorgeous eyes.

...as proven by countless Theban Band photomanips. If looks alone could compensate for shitty things, Krycek would be instantly forgiven. *g*

I think what'd definitely help in the "forgive me, Fox" cause would be first having a very dangerous key role in preventing the colonization (with of course a bit of Krycek whumping goin' on, heh), and then chaining himself naked to Mulder's bed and saying - "Do whatever you want with me. I deserve what I get." *VBG*

Perfect recipe for success. *eg*

So they did what they could, and left all sorts of stuff out (some intentionally) due to the combined time/budget constraints and pressure from the network (yes, I have serious issues with TPTB at Skiffy), and are now hoping to clear a bunch of stuff up in Season 3.

I'll keep my fingers crossed for that! I would be so relieved to rediscover my love for SGA and McShep - I seriously miss it, but the thought of their later actions sour even "Rising" for me.

Then again, how hard must it have been to come up with episodes to hold up after a Quentin Tarrantino production like that? Yup, love that man's directorial style.

I'm not into CSI, but I watched that one episode. I wasn't all that impressed, but Nick is definitely the little black dress of that fandom. *g*
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[identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Eeep, you have a Hobbes/Fawkes icon! ;-)
Yes, I am and always will be a devoted IManiac. *BG* Hell, I even work on the I-Man Virtual Seasons with a handful of freakishly cool friends. ;)

I'll keep my fingers crossed for that! I would be so relieved to rediscover my love for SGA and McShep - I seriously miss it, but the thought of their later actions sour even "Rising" for me.

I understand. And will do whatever's in my albeit limited powers to ensure that your McShep mojo comes back with a vengeance. ;)

I'm not into CSI, but I watched that one episode.
Yeah, my husband's the same way.

I wasn't all that impressed, but Nick is definitely the little black dress of that fandom. *g*
Heh. He's the main reason I watch the show. That, and the interesting character interaction dynamics. And the freaky-cool stuff they talk about in regards to forensics. heh.
----}-@
[identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 06:25 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
Robert Picardo (Woolsey) is listed on IMDB as being in two upcoming episodes of SGA. LINK (http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000585/)

Weir's behavior was actually kinda consistent with her previous interactions with Kav back in 38 Minutes; she was way out of line back then, too. Of course, so was Kav (in the "damn, he has bad timing/bad interpersonal skills" way), but Weir's statement that he was only interested in saving his own butt and promise to exile him alone on a deserted planet, because he was voicing concerns about the possible explosive destruction of the Atlantis 'gate and objecting to her abrupt dismissal of his concerns? Was such an overreaction. But then, I had such issues with 38 Minutes that I actually stopped watching the show for several weeks because of it.

But also, this kind of overreaction to dissenting scientific opinion and supposed "insubordination" is par for the course for the SGC who did, after all, send Rodney to Siberia basically because he was rude. Or was it a punishment for his theory being wrong, because that's just as bad.

In many ways, both within the show and in looking at the show creators' patterns, Kav serves a similar role for SGA that Rodney did for SG1.
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[identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 06:50 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
In many ways, both within the show and in looking at the show creators' patterns, Kav serves a similar role for SGA that Rodney did for SG1.

Oooooooo... what an excellent comparison! I hadn't really thought of it that way, but it maks absolutely perfect sense now that I do. :) Thanks!
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[identity profile] allaire.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 30th, 2006 08:59 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow
:::agrees all the way:::

I've never been able to understand the instant hatred in the SGA fandom for Kavanagh. The parallels to pre-SGA Rodney were so obvious, and Weir just had to see him to flip - and for no reason.

Part of a democracy is the right to speak up and criticize. Weir, who as a peace negociator should be the very opposite, is strangely enough the perfect example for a totalitarian leader who equals critique with treason.

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